![]() For some reason he had a bad feeling about them. Another larger ship was parked nearby, that one was surrounded by human looking men in strange combat armour, though as he looked closely they seemed to be vaguely familiar. He then felt himself following a starship through the atmosphere until it landed in a large clearing amidst an alien looking forest of purple and yellow growths. The Kildar soon found himself looking down on a strange alien world below him. “I made a spiritual clone of you, I need someone to shake things up a bit in this reality.” The baffled man gaped at the light around him. “SORRY about that, sometimes I forget my own power”. “YOU DID SURVIVE”, Jenkins shuddered at the strange power behind the voice and visibly winced. The ghost of Mike Jenkins, otherwise known as the Kildar, looked down at his body. “Hmm, that ought to have been survivable”. Meanwhile Mike Jenkins aka the Kildar has been injured in a fight against evil terrorists. The same Death Watch warband is also about to ransom a high value captive to representatives of the Republic. Jango Fett and a handful of his Mandalorian followers are about to be sold in slavery by members of the Death Watch. Feedback regarding abuse of canon is welcome, and please bear in mind that sometimes I have had to be flexible with the source material (though not as flexible as the recent trilogy). With that said Canon to me is the movies, and possibly KOTOR, but not necessarily most of the other stuff I have not played or seen. I will try to be respectful of canon, but for reasons of plot sometimes things will have to be flexible, especially a couple of dates early on. I make this comment to reassure those worried about any inappropriate content on a family friendly website, but also to say it is not aimed at children. That said given the source material the existence of his strange sex life this will have to be acknowledged in some form so there will be some minor references. Those who have read the Kildar books will note the sex scenes included by John Ringo, for a variety of sound reasons I will avoid descriptions of nookie or nudity in this story. Feedback is encouraged (particularly on writing style issues) as I am looking to improve my writing technique, this is something of an experiment for me. I am happy with the story as it stands as it is a full story arc, but do hope to continue it once I have planned out the next section. I have posted this on another site, and several readers suggested there might interest in it here, currently it stands at 120k words and runs up to the end of the 'Phantom Menace Era'. If you are not familiar with him I recommend reading one of the books, they are quite memorable. The Kildar, or Mike Jenkins amongst other names, is a former SEAL with plentiful layers of plot armour and an unusual personality. I have come to the reluctant conclusion that what the internet really needs is a cross-over between Star Wars and John Ringo’s Kildar series.
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